Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have a baby leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for upbringing. To what extend you agree and disagree with the statement
This is very common to think that mother is the only person who is responsible to take a decision of having a baby. However, father also play an important role in terms of bringing up their kids. I believe being parents, both have shared responsibility so the decision should be taking by mutual understanding.
In one hand, mother has to face 9 months’ pregnancy duration and then labour, which impact on her health physiologically as well as psychologically. Furthermore, she has to lactate her baby at least two years. In this manner, she reserves a right in taking a decision. However, the financial status is an undeniable fact and father is mainly responsible in this regard. As a result, father's duty, couldn't be ignored. Therefore, he is equally responsible to come up with decision in extending their family.
On the other hand, mums are not bounding themselves to stay at home, as a house wife. They want to pursue their career even after a baby. In this case, father is the only one who can provide good care to their kids in her absence. Fathers may give their valuable time to their kids. They can teach, play and engage them in various activities which help them in positive development. For example, recent research indicates that the kids who spent more time with their fathers tend to be more creative and they have a strong sense of imagination.
In conclusion, I believe that both parents should take equal responsibility in making up decision for having their little ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...this regard. As a result, fathers duty, couldnt be ignored. Therefore, he is equally re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82768607613 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2070328113 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9375 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149323441645 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479004216946 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473208012977 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102096090946 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233797704682 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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