Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your answer with examples and relevant evidence.
Many citizens complain about the government's policy for health sector. government use to emphasise more on welfare of the hospitals or medical institutes. But what if the government can mitigate diseases or infection at a first place? I strongly believe that government should take appropriate steps to spread awareness among people.
Firstly, the government should give more importance to environment control procedures, as environmental change can have an adverse effect on people. For example, india has 6 of top 10 most polluted cities in the world. As a countermeasure, the government decides to give subsidy to use green energy sources like solar energy or wind energy. they had also increased tax for toxic products or products which have toxic by-products. As a result, this money can be utilised for other benefits.
In addition, the government won't be able to apply these remedies effectively without public support. citizens should be aware of their surroundings and their actions also. For example, it is very much surprising that Asia's cleanest village is also in india. Dirhang, a city in Assam is cleanest because of it's residents. The awareness and maturity of the people is enough to keep this village clean. Locals are already aware of the importance of health and they also know which product or procedure is harmful to their health. it is also observed that this healthy lifestyle had give them tremendous benefits. So rather than investing plethora of money in hospitals, the government should focus on public awareness.
In a nutshell, spending money only to cure disease is not a feasible solution. The government should run campaign and programs for awareness and also invest money to stop causes at a very first stage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
Many citizens complain about the governments policy for health sector. government us...
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Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Government
...e governments policy for health sector. government use to emphasise more on welfare of the...
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Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ts policy for health sector. government use to emphasise more on welfare of the hos...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...urces like solar energy or wind energy. they had also increased tax for toxic produc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Citizens
...ies effectively without public support. citizens should be aware of their surroundings a...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...of their surroundings and their actions also. For example, it is very much surprisin...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'Asias the cleanest'.
Suggestion: Asias the cleanest
...xample, it is very much surprising that Asias cleanest village is also in india. Dirhang, a ci...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...r procedure is harmful to their health. it is also observed that this healthy life...
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Line 5, column 580, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...bserved that this healthy lifestyle had give them tremendous benefits. So rather tha...
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Line 5, column 580, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[3]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...bserved that this healthy lifestyle had give them tremendous benefits. So rather tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20141342756 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81745344702 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5085886351 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4736842105 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8947368421 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123125409299 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387898627452 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379392509378 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753388106445 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338923558867 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.