Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
For the optimum psychological and social growth of any child, fatherhood has an important role. I disagree with the common belief that women should only be responsible for the upbringing of a child because they decided to have babies. Analysing the factors such as the need of fatherly figure, economic factors involved will prove our point.
Firstly, the decision of having a child is always mutual. Although there can be some delays depending on individual’s preferences in life or the economic instability, the end goal is to have a better, safer and more stable future for the coming child. For instance, it is a common practice in Germany to have babies when women are in the 30s, just because of job instability and economic issues. Nevertheless, the end decision involves mutual consent.
Secondly, every child needs a fatherly figure in his life. A role model that he can look up to and share in case of any physical, emotional of psychological need. The lack of a fatherhood will create a gap in any child's mind. Recent surveys show that almost 80% of children raised by single mothers develop psychological issues owing to lack of a fatherly presence. Thus a need of father for
optimum upbringing is very much needed.
Similarly, in the current time of economic instability, many people have to work even during night time to make both ends meet. In such situation, the division of financial responsibilities among both partners help. Many women have to work during nights and in such cases, the presence of father at home will create a sense of safety and satisfaction among children and vies Versa.
I conclusion, deciding to have a child is not only women's decision and the economic need and presence of fatherly figure emphasises the fatherhood as much ad motherhood. Hence I disagree to statement mentioned in the topic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95806451613 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86316627597 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558064516129 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7167943339 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4117647059 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212535426225 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644174704299 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663096182183 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105989577199 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520480177963 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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