Fossil fuels (coal, oil and natural gas) are the main sources in many countries. However, in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy (wind and solar energy) are encouraged. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Despite some countries still using fossil fuels as the main source of energy, the use of alternative sources has been receiving a great deal of public attention. In my opinion, this could be seen as positive progress because of their environmentally friendly and practically infinite resource.
The biggest advantage of using alternate sources is that they can reduce air pollution. Rising consumption of fossil fuels is set to drive up greenhouse gas emissions and global temperatures, resulting in potentially catastrophic and irreversible climate change. All of the forms relate to resources based on energy such as solar, wind, hydro, are mostly green, clean, and renewable and therefore could provide an answer to the reduction of carbon dioxide.
The other advantage is that the use of renewable energy will boundless supply of energy for future generations. For example, wind and solar power are both everlasting sources of power while conventional sources like coal and oil take millions of years to form but they have been consumed at an alarming rate. Furthermore, although the initial cost of setting up solar panels and wind farms is expensive as these are dependent on the geographic locations. However, once the initial cost has been met with, their maintenance is practically negligible.
In conclusion, alternative sources are a safe solution to the fear of energy security and ensure a better environment in human life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...rophic and irreversible climate change. All of the forms relate to resources based on ener...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34210526316 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94160620944 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6338641151 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.8 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335739618663 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108602856926 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858742847148 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181898285389 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428562439596 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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