Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil, and natural gas, are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Although the type of fuel which a lot of nations mainly use is fossils like coal, oil, and natural gas, it is also reported that alternative types of energy like sun and wind power are being produced by some other countries. Both of the sides, as well as my personal opinion, are presented in this essay.
To begin with, we must consider the positive side of utilizing alternative energy. If people make use of renewable energy, it will reduce the level of environmental pollution, which is a burning issue that major cities face. Not only do solar panels and wind turbines not give out smoke and fumes so that the quality of the air we breathe in is cleaner, but less CO2 is also released and global warming is slowed. Another reason why alternative energy should be given priority over fossil fuel is that a future of electric automobiles could come true. When this becomes possible, humans will not use petroleum anymore and exhaust fumes will no longer exist.
With that being said, there are some benefits of fossil fuels we need to take into account. Firstly, these fuels cost less money than the alternative ones because they do not require financial investment to set up facilities and equipment, which may be remarkably expensive. Therefore, in comparison to alternative energy, fossil fuels are an attractive option to businesses. Secondly, it can be observed that there are a number of countries that can only afford fossil fuels due to the fact that they need to focus more on the other sectors of the economy. For instance, the government will have to put money into the production of solar panels and the poor people will also have to use their hard-earned money to buy the panel in case a poor country wants to make solar power popular.
Putting both sides into perspective, they point me to the conclusion that using alternative energy is an expensive but worthy investment. From my personal belief, health is still more important than wealth as far as a world for the future generation is concerned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...tries. Both of the sides, as well as my personal opinion, are presented in this essay. To beg...
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Line 5, column 753, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'want'?
Suggestion: want
...to buy the panel in case a poor country wants to make solar power popular. Putting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82183908046 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54965873748 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5428487345 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264876381302 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775126185838 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662620356138 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156152833647 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786549779272 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.