Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Freedom of expression is the foundation of human right; the value of speech played a immense role in the development of democracy. It allows people to convey what he she like, it given openness to share views etc, the following essay will discuss the value of freedom of speech in modern society.
Freedom brought immense change in the world, in many countries it has brought magnificent improvement in the economy of the country, basically it allows people, media to question the politician over commitments presented during elections rallies, also, such open expressions gives chance to people to cast vote and elect president whom they find fit for the post; for instance, recent riots in the Middle East forced dictatorships to transfer power to the hands of public hold offices than armed man, meanwhile, the continuous struggle lastly compelled governments to step down and state hailed for re-poll. The public voice didn’t go unheard by the world; however, such free speeches brought giant change in the country subsequently new era of democratic system arrived.
On the other hand, sometimes such expression may act as oil in the fire in cases of religious outrage or national security, for this reason freedom of speech followed by laws and rule. In United States the people of fully free to say what he/she likes to express, however, people aren’t allow to hurt any belief or discuss openly national security issues in the public.
In conclusion, free expression is the matter of basic right of the individual and it is obligatory for open society, it helps to promote democratic system.
- In some countries few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the govt should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both the views and give your opinion? 76
- The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress To what extent do you agree 90
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extent do you agree or disagree with 67
- Some people feel that certain workers like nurses doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the 89
- Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars To what extent do you agree or disagree 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...human right; the value of speech played a immense role in the development of demo...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esident whom they find fit for the post; for instance, recent riots in the Middle...
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Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hurting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: hurting
...ress, however, people aren't allow to hurt any belief or discuss openly national s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, lastly, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14015151515 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6780035145 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.002616409 49.4020404114 316% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.857142857 106.682146367 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.7142857143 20.7667163134 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114154542912 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056630830252 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0162563844199 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704305970745 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125906923605 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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