full-time university student spend a lot of time studying however they sholud perform other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this 21st century, the foundation of any clever country is its an education system. Full- time educational Institute students spend most of the time upon studying, however, they ought to perform other activities as well. I partially agree with this statement.
On one hand, it is essential for all the people to be an educated and students, who are the future of the country, if there are intelligent the nation will be prosperous. University people spend a lot of time upon learning and do hard work because they want to do something big and new, which assists to gain the reputation of the society as well as Nation, not only that but also get a chance to get a name and fame around the universal. For an example, the previous Prime Minister of India - Doctor Abdul Kalam, the world knows as a missile man, he gets this token because he did hard work and spend too much time to achieve his goals.
On the other hand, presently, there are many young age learners are affected by some sort of mental diseases stress, anxiety, depression and so on, because they have pressure of study and tension, accordingly, they utilise more time upon learning which might be affect their mind. Some psychiatrists suggest that, to do some other activities. For an instance, students are doing one activity for long time : spend much time on study, it makes some mental problems, so, they have to do some other activities : get an entertainment, play games and spend time with friends, which help to decrease the stress level - which is shown by one scientific research.
To conclude, it is sine-qua-non to spend more time on study to achieve ambitions of life but sometimes it affects mentally, accordingly, they need to do some other activities to stay safe from mental issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, well, sort of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79411764706 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61008410245 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2036030323 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.7 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335508113936 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128665537444 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108739322828 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208430437773 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437588568045 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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