Some people think that education should help students to be useful to the whole society, while other people think that education should provide students with opportunities to archieve personal ambitious. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this 21st century, the foundation of any clever country is its education system. some people believe that, education ought to help the students to be useful to whole the society. others, however, think that, education should provide pupils to achieve personal goals.
On the one hand, children are the future of nation, if they are intelligent the country will be prosperous. educated students are very helpful for the nation, all children have different interest in various field : some want be teacher, doctor, scientist, engineer and many more. after completion of study if they will get a better position in particular field it will be beneficial for the country or society. For an instance, if any pupil will be a scientist, it gains the reputation of the society also country when get a success in any kind of research and when more students will be educated and get a good job, it assists to not only reduces the poverty rate but also decreases the unemployment rate of the nation.
On the other hand, education is the key to open the door of career as well as success. it is necessary to be an educated to get better job - which assists to earn money, increases the income which is vert helpful. For an example, when they have a source of income and get better financial support after that they prefer to live lavish life style and try to achieve their own ambitious.
To conclude, in my opinion, adjuration should assist to be helpful for the whole country also to achieve personal ambitious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in particular, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79310344828 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53795374509 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3251935582 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.727272727 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25548587141 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111537344664 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983742495885 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178981270455 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111026692868 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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