In the future, all cars buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside this vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicle outweighs the disadvantages?
There is a general consensus that in time to come, all four wheelers will not need a driver. In every journey, the only needed person will be the commuters. I believe the benefits this claim supersedes the drawbacks and the reasons for this notion will be explained in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, perhaps the demerits of cars, buses and trucks I that it brings about a reduction in numbers of occupations. For example, when drivers are no longer needed, a fraction of the populace will ultimately becomes jobless. In addition, minor mechanical faults developed by the automobile while driving may not be attended to on time due to inexperience of the passengers to ascertain what is wrong. Thus resulting in abandoned motors on the road side leading to roadblock.
On the other hand, a driveless vehicle has a lot of merits in that their owners will not be obliged to pay salaries to drivers. As a result such funds are saves and utilized on other expenses. Also, alternative roads will be plied in case of traffic jam. To illustrate, due to the fact that they are technically built, there is likelihood they will detect traffic congestion from far distance and then able to divert their navigation. Hence delays on the road are easily avoided.
In conclusion, vehicle without the need of a driver could possibly result in decreased job opportunities and delayed in attending to small error when there is a brake down while the advantages is that it cut-off the money spent on driver's as well as gives notifications on other less congested routes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'consensus'.
Suggestion: consensus
There is a general consensus that in time to come, all four wheelers...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...raction of the populace will ultimately becomes jobless. In addition, minor mechanical ...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...d then able to divert their navigation. Hence delays on the road are easily avoided. ...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...n, vehicle without the need of a driver could possibly result in decreased job opportunities a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86940298507 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75271742447 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0378326463 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259938449102 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810486666945 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713589071344 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136390778997 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687912388972 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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