Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both this views and give your own opinion.
There is a widespread argument about the expected place for an expert to practice. A fraction of populace think that people like physicians and engineers should be made to practice in their nation while others opine that their human rights should not be infringed upon when they decide to work in different county. This essay will discuss the two view point and my personal opinion will be made known.
On the one hand, a school of taught allude that letting professionals to do their jobs in their home country is a way of giving back to the society that had imbibed knowledge in them. As a result, more hands will be on deck and scientific needs will be met ultimately. Hence, making them work in their own nation seems vital.
On the other hand, opponent of this notion claimed that when scientist are allowed to work in another country as preferred, additional knowledge and skills may be acquired with certification. To illustrate, A medical doctor in south west part of Nigeria was said to have upgraded his community health-wise on his return from overseas after gained knowledge. In essence, it is of great benefit to let them work freely in different country.
In my opinion, experts like doctors and engineers should be given the opportunity to make their choice. Either to stay in their own country in order to earn their daily living or to travel abroad so as to learn more because both decisions has their merit.
In conclusion, when professionals are ensured to practice in their country, more able hands will be available regularly. However, when they work in other country, their experiences will be widened and they may possibly come back to give to their nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... will discuss the two view point and my personal opinion will be made known. On the one hand,...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... their daily living or to travel abroad so as to learn more because both decisions has t...
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Line 9, column 207, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'may', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: may; possibly
...ir experiences will be widened and they may possibly come back to give to their nation.
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Line 9, column 207, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'may'.
Suggestion: may
...ir experiences will be widened and they may possibly come back to give to their nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85813148789 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57063385709 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584775086505 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7709789909 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351006321201 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115839935045 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847485856897 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192020407987 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518506709801 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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