In the future, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, many people believe that transports like car, bus and truck will be driven automatically and in the car, only people in that. In my opinion, I firmly hold that there are more benefits than drawbacks to this phenomenon.
On the one hand, it exists several disadvantages to the aforementioned trend. First and foremost, mode driving without human cannot change completely people. Almost, the dangerous case on the road can be predicted, which occur suddenly, so in the vehicle need a driver to address. To illustrate, suddenly having cat on the road, diver will avoid it, while driverless can hit the cat if it does not recognize the cat soon. Moreover, the driverless program will be had some troubles while running. The app controls all the function of car, such as speed, gas and machines. If a function is fixed, the car will become dangerous with people and other transports on the road. To illustrate, if speeding mode faces to wrong program, the car can only increase the speed.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that driving without human will bring many advantages. The main reason is that the rate of traffic jams in the city will fall dramatically because of helping of the driving program. To explain, the program collects the data about traffic lights, maps and the number of vehicles on the road after collecting and analyzing the statistics. Afterwards, the app will choose the road, which is suitable for the trip. Additionally, passengers and people are more safety when hanging out. Following the mentioned above, the data on the road is collected and analyzed to select the safe road.
In conclusion, while the driving without human still has drawbacks, but I would argue that we gain than we lose from this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62313425759 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3894127501 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2941176471 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211069385307 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596273276731 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566316008657 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111357825188 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687194362889 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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