It can be observed that the Earth has been facing many problems, and few years later it would be trouble situation for human life. Spending huge amount of money to find other planet for habitant is only option for human being. I firmly disagree with the statement and my stance is justified further.
Researching alternative method for live on other planet is not proper solution. The main factor behind spoiling the earth is that human spread pollution and make the globe become uninhabitable. Consequently, global warming and green house effect have been produced as a result temperature and sea level have increased in all over the world. It can be solved by all individuals little help. They should plant more and more tree and prevent pollution which is spread by vehicles and industries.
Furthermore, some toxic gases are emited by factories and vehicles. This toxic gases normally contain carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide and sulfar oxide, which may be affect climate change thus amount of rain will be decreased. Owing to this the Earth will not survive longer if people continue to spreding pollution. However, these all concern would be solved by internationally. For example, If all nations should spend money to concerve environment, it will win-win situation for human life. Also people should give pledge to save and preserve environment insted of seeking other planet.
To conclude, although westing money to find new planet is very long and complicated process, it can be solved by joint affort of nations and individuals and make the Earth become inhabitable.
- Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students.Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?Some people argue that living on earth is bec 73
- Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion. 61
- Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 494, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... will win-win situation for human life. Also people should give pledge to save and p...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17898832685 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64796784589 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6730967963 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259281772055 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769108042558 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431577058578 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139076346681 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339267661781 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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