In the future it will become more difficult to live on Earth so more money should be spent researching how to live on other planets such as Mars.
do you agree or disagree?
In all times people have been thinking about what is up there. However, nowadays humanity knows that the Earth in not a only one planet with life. Now we have another one-Mars, and it is becoming more and more difficult to stay on our planet, that is why authorities ought to spent much more money on discovering how to start life on Mars. I absolutely support the idea of colonization of Mars and believe that it is possible nowadays.
Firstly, the Red planet can be a perfect fallback for all humanity if our planet is going to be destroyed for some reason. It means that any catastrophe that could happen will not kill all of us. Therefore, the huge number of people will be alive and can continue our civilization and development in the future. Thus, Mars is the only one viable option of this theoretic situation.
Secondly, the fourth planet from the sun is a superb object for exploration about our and universe’s origin. Moreover, new resources can be found there to improve the level of development. For example, new fuel, elements for the periodic table, metals, which are more efficient compared with what we have found. Hence, Mars is a great choice to open our mind widely and find enormous amount of new fascinating and useful things.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that it is quite important to discover new worlds, owing to the fact that exploration has always been an engine of progress for all the humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ys humanity knows that the Earth in not a only one planet with life. Now we have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72222222222 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59578412779 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2539010657 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5384615385 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175750493151 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530964051927 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612365746244 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939575297916 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076641771719 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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