Some people agree with spending lots of money on large wedding, while others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views
In all times wedding has been the most important event for every person. However, nowadays some part of society believe that, it is absolutely perfect to spend abundant money on weddings, while others state that it is useless. This essay will discuss both views and provide some evidences for these statements.
On the one hand, huge wedding ceremonies are fascinating and funny for all the guests. It means that, this event provides numerous contests and amusement. Therefore, this marriage assembly is an excellent pastime for a husband and his wife with all guests including their parents and close friends. For example, on this event the friend of the husband and friend of the wife can meet each other and maybe in the remote future it will entail them to commence dating. Thus, this ceremony is an incredibly awesome place to meet new friends or to initiate dating with someone.
On the other hand, in marriage ceremonies there are no common sense to waste enormous amount of money for the family who just has married. In other words, family is creating a lot for their guests, due to the fact that they really want to celebrate this occasion. For instance, they are purchasing food products, renting a special house usually beyond the city, also hiring expensive cars, everything costs money, and of course it is exorbitantly expensive. Hence, this event is a totally waste of money for some useless things such as celebrities with guests and family.
To conclude, this essay has discussed both points of views regarding spending enormous amount of money on a marriage ceremony and provide some facts that confirms every opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('totally') instead an adjective, or a noun ('waste') instead of another adjective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, of course, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01459854015 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42826650831 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.466411455 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251072078067 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901226700139 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746486223072 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176803546951 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792495077936 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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