In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that online reading sources become predominant and gradually replace printed newspapers and books on the grounds that people want to approach information without paying. The following paragraphs will support this statement.
Firstly, online materials will contribute to solving money-wasting problems. The reason is that people can effortlessly find reliable sources through the Internet and download them in a matter of second. Indeed, they will store a wide range of e-books or materials in their smartphone or laptop and bring to their workplace. In contrast, if people prefer to use printed books, they will spend a huge amount of money on buying them as well as a number of time on choosing the most suitable book’s type. Therefore, workers and students can stand a golden chance of saving money and time for printing all kinds of favorite books or buying authentic books in stores.
Besides that, reading online is completely up to date and effortlessly accessible for everyone. This is because nowadays more and more synonymous book brands upload their products on their website which people can get access without difficulties. In this case, it will be very smooth for them to download and update information weekly even every morning. For example, instead of purchasing newspaper in stores, people can read newspaper easily thanks to their smartphone’s daily online newspaper apps. Moreover, recent audio books and online materials also have a variety of types and contents leading to readers’ comfort to choose. Thus, it will create students more invaluable opportunities to approach precise and various source of knowledge and boost their score at school.
In conclusion, although printed books used to be popular and useful in the past, they cost a huge amount of money to possess. Therefore, people need to choose online reading with an eye to save money and own budget.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...paragraphs will support this statement. Firstly, online materials will contribut...
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...th an eye to save money and own budget.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27540983607 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70094293109 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577049180328 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7774603161 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274344976773 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902911215471 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04697782853 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174241328302 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313596199146 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.