Reading news and book on smartphones using online sources ia increasingly popular nowadays. However,it is predected that in future, no one will buy paper printed newspaper or priented books Because of such trend. I completly agree with the statement and discussion related to my agreement wipp be discuss in following paragraph.
Reading on electronic device is benificial. Firstly, it increases flexiblity as well as drecreases labour, as we do not have to carry two-three books with us, we can simply store pdfs of such books and it ause to read anywhere we want because it dont required large storage space. Secondly, as advancement in technolgy has also increased youngsters can add bookmark in the pdfs where they left their reading,as well as it aslo has features to search for ununderstable word by just switiching the application, which also makes it smarter. For example, if someone cannot understand contex of tthe word then,he or she can simply search it by just switiching the application in the device, which is not possible in traditional printed newspaper or book.
On the other hand, few individual believes that using mobile device to read novels and news can damage eyes which can be avoided by applying blue light filter on the screen,in fact some mobile brands provide in built option to stop sich damaging lights. Additionally, few believes that sometime online source of news spread fake news, which can be prevented by only reading and forwording news which is telecasted by trusted news agencies. For example, insted of watching news broadcastwd by any unknown community,it is preferd to use well known media source.
In conclusion, there are many positive aspect of reading news and articles online like, it is cheap and eassy to carry compare to few negative issues which can be avoided. If online source is used in safetly manner i agree that online media is more advantagegous compare to its priented alternatives for the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16199376947 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83668424333 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6057336964 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.636363636 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196426011168 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730961856986 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553278832143 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125230032343 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709578804511 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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