In the future nobody will purchase published papers or books since they will be able to read them virtually and free.
In the future nobody will purchase published papers or books since they will be able to read them virtually and free. I completely agree with that statement as I consider that reading online is more convenient, time saving and accessible beyond its zero payment.
Firstly, it is an indisputable fact that today holding and bringing huge and thick books with ourselves might seem quite strange and uncommon as they have already been replaced with smart devices such as mobile phones and tablets . With the help of them just switching on the mobile data , we have countless opportunities to manage any types of activities, no matter they are job or study duties or for pleasure. One feature is that they are time saving and comfortable to use in all times. For instant, I, myself, never buy books from library stores because I prefer to load them from websites as they are pretty faster than book delivers thus there is no need to wait much.
Additionally, there are a lot of advantages of reading virtually, one of them is accessiblity. It means that not all information or news related to the world could not be found in local newspapers. Therefore, there is a distinctive priority of reading online. Furthermore, it does not require to pay as the data is ready to be used worldwide for free.
In conclusion, people will get rid off issued materials such as newspaper and books as they want to read online. I believe that there are benefits of reading online beyond its free cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...evices such as mobile phones and tablets . With the help of them just switching on...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f them just switching on the mobile data , we have countless opportunities to man...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e data , we have countless opportunities to manage any types of activities, no ma...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'paying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: paying
...nline. Furthermore, it does not require to pay as the data is ready to be used worldwi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s as they want to read online. I believe that there are benefits of reading onlin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re benefits of reading online beyond its free cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78988326848 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63309706638 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9273778157 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.583333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424854086 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150530562632 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.2592210912 0.0667982634062 388% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268245629076 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.211674133314 0.056905535591 372% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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