Task 2: In many countries, it is acceptable that governments spend money on religious holidays such as New Year.
To what extent do you agree and disagree with this?
It is often argued that financing for the spiritual festivals like New Year is so common for authorities in major countries. I completely agree with that statement because celebrating religious holidays is the most crucial priority people to encourage themselves.
Firstly, it is an indisputable fact that every culture has their own distinctive traditional with inseparable festivals. It means that customs are performed with specific preparations. And those all require more efforts. Taking Europe as an example, Europeans are festival lovers and they adore each actions which are held in celebratory days even they are involved too much excessive expenses.
Secondly, it is vitally important to note that celebrating holidays is a means of recognition of oneself, - who you are. This can lead to identify the core of one's individuality. For instance, in my country, Uzbekistan, there are various religious celebrations from cradle to the grave. All of them need to be invested money.
By way of my conclusion, I reaffirm my position again. Even thought celebrating religious holidays costs to much money, it helps to direct humanity how to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39226519337 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05083128824 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71270718232 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1669960461 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156944042356 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483282121324 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398539006828 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876795590608 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386327828563 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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