Nowadays, when society is being more and more developing. Gay marriage is becoming a new trend in the world. while some people argued that this trend has a bad impact on society, I tend to side with the opinion that it is a natural trend and it should be legal for some reason showed below.
in fact, some people believe that the gay marriage trend is not good for society for some reason. first, this trend is opposite to the traditional marriage rules: men with women. most of the people who have a not good feeling when they see two women or two men kiss each other. this is opposite to the gender issue, that we are learned in school. second, the couple women or men can not have babies, this impacts on social life because of the issue of marriage and having babies are natural results of normal people.
on the other hand, I would argue that the issue of gay marriage is a natural trend and it should be legal. first, this fits with their natural gender. people are always equal in all fields of life. they are happy with the same gender people, there is not what reason to limit their life. second, this trend absolutely is suitable for the development of social life. because, there are more and more gay men and les women, so we should agree a fact that gay marriage is natural. Finally, marriage is choosing of each people, and gay marriage too.
in conclusion, although there is some opinion argued that gay marriage is not good for society, I think that this trend is natural and right, and it should be protected by the law.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44522968198 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11599712753 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445229681979 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1297359356 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.625 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21134378238 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081322602206 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502329993141 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154872651977 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354020522992 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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