Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
It is true that the exorable increase in the global temperature is treating the security of humans. There is a host of reason attributed to this problem. However, I am of the opinion that human activities are the main factor in the rise of greenhouse gases. Therefore, in this essay, I not only show the causes of global warming but also propose several holistic approaches to deal with this issue.
To begin with, the important causes of global warming are, firstly, the industrial revolution in modern time, which lead to an increase in the releasing of gases into the atmosphere like carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide,... These gases are known to go up the temperature of the atmosphere by trapping ultraviolet rays into the earth's atmosphere. Moreover, population explosion has resulted in excessive dependence on fossil fuels for cars, public transport, and railway. So, the number of cars on the streets is growing all the time, cheap air travel is making flying accessible to more and more people, the amount of greenhouses emitted from these machines into the atmosphere has no sign of decreasing. Furthermore, deforestation done by the humans for their habits and agriculture has resulted to loss of trees which are cleaners of combustion gases into the atmosphere. For example, millions of trees have died over 15 years in the Rocky Mountains because of exploitation of farmers in this village, which is a victim of climate-driving assaulting wildfire and insects, stress from heat and drought.
The governments should have some solutions to tackle these problems. Firstly, Should the competent authorities introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to use renewable energy such as form solar, wind, water power,... there will a decline in the amount of toxic from manufactures discharged to the environment. The governments should levy " green taxes" on drivers or airline companies. Therefore, citizens are likely to be encouraged to use public transport and tale fewer flights abroad, which leads to reducing the emission from vehicles of ownership. In term of individuals, citizens also contribute to significant effect on decreasing the global temperature. Not only they should choose products with less packaging and recycle as much as possible but also supermarkets need to provide useable bags for shoppers as well as " bank" for recycling glass, paper in their car parks.
In conclusion, global warming which is an extremely serious issue needs to be addressed as the priority. The governments and individuals should join hands to reduce this threat and save the earth as well as the future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
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Line 2, column 326, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...gy such as form solar, wind, water power,... there will a decline in the amount of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25526932084 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92215736558 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578454332553 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3979308993 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.105263158 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21052631579 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127422479654 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393856418945 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603534961456 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988046907942 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691274471824 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.