Globalisation has both advantages and disadvantages.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that globalisation has concurrently benefits and drawbacks. Personally I am both fascinated by the development brought by globalisation and apprehensive about its negative impacts.
On the one hand, the increasing globalisation in many respects brings some obvious advantages. As more companies establish overseas, there have been more employment opportunities created. Therefore, people can have a better job without having to leave their home countries. For instance, many high-tech companies now have their offices in India and many Indian people work for those. Without globalisation, Indians would not have had that chance to work for such companies in India. At the same time, globalisation also opens the door to higher education for many students, especially from underdeveloped and developing countries. It is now easier for people, for example from China or Vietnam, to acquire better schooling in Western countries than in the past.
On the other hand, I share the concerns of people who believe that globalisation is harmful if we are not careful. Firstly, as more companies move their production facilities to other countries with cheaper labour price, they leave behind them many unemployed workers. Besides, the decline in employment growth rate partly results from the promotion of the application of technology in many aspects of manufacturing. It has been seen in the past few years, such advances have led to an increase in unemployment in many developing economies. Finally, while countless multinational companies are expanding their business all over the world, it results in a fact that small-scale industries face extinction. It is clearly understood that small-scale companies which do not have enough resources or power to compete with international companies will soon be removed from the business.
In conclusion, I believe that while globalisation no doubt improves life in certain circumstances, the potential risks of such that tendency should not be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53094462541 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17189926443 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605863192182 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5746397158 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0593390584874 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.024153814987 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393264118504 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582318399521 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601250148789 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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