Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the steady growth in modernization, the lifestyles of people have been greatly effected. They have achieved various milestones; however, some issues remain unchallenged and as complex as ever. One such issue here is governor- agencies should have expenditure economy on railways than roads construction. Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
Taking one side of the argument, there are people who believe that if government will being spend money on railways development than roads. They raise many assertions in defence such as It is highly beneficial for individual, Due to this reason, population will become surging in nowadays. Whereas it helps to control the traffic .other hand, trains is cheaper transport than other public transportation. According to my perspective, it is convenient source for everyone.
To some extent, in the contemporary scenario a technology change railway transport in electrical trains so it is the best way to protect environment for pollution. In my point of view, I strongly support this idea, administration should spend money on electrical trains.
Admittedly, some may disagree by coming up with the idea, there are antagonist to this assertion who believe that government expend money on roads construction than trains path. They bolster their view point by claiming that the roads is beneficial for transportation business from one nation to another. Additionally, they have highly beneficial to merchants. It will be sophisticated for goods to home delivery. Due to this reason, railway track could not have provide facility to home delivery. The best epitome that is Pakistan and India, both nation are import food used to roads not railway train's . Especially, it is the best way and not enough expensive for business man.
To crown it all, I pen down saying that, weighing both the options; I believe that there is no single conclusion still; I take this got that effective clap requires both use of hands, I reckon that both transportation is beneficial and significant for individuals. Railway is save a ton of time and other hand, roads vehicle is cheaper so, according my perception, government spend economy on both development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, whereas, i reckon, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32692307692 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98385472226 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541208791209 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8756123723 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.052631579 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1578947368 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191214949656 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569408782029 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403437087463 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107924511666 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307732340671 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.