Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree?
Environmental protection has been one of the fiercely debated issues over the last few years. Although governments play a directing role in tackling this significant problem, I cast no doubt on the view that people should be held accountable for the environment in their own area.
The primary reason why it is citizens’ responsibility to look after the environment is that it is obligatory that all species who are living on this planet preserve the environment. In other words, it is not some single person or organization's duty to take care of it. Admittedly, the government raises taxes on gas to encourage people to use eco-friendly fuels with a view to reducing air pollution. However, people's gas consumption still increases owing to the fact that it is too difficult for them to change the habit in the short term. What can be inferred from this is that it will never be able to handle everything if the public does not move.
In addition, only when each resident get involved in local environmental preservation, will they realize how seriously the ecosystem is being degraded. In fact, some environmental issues are too big for individuals to deal with. However, small activities such as taking out the trash in the right place or using paper bags instead of plastic bags could help the government prevent damage to the earth.
In conclusion, the safeguarding of the natural environment not only requires the leadership of the government but also the cooperation and participation of individual citizens.
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| 2022-08-23 | Lê Khánh Diệp | 89 | view |
| 2022-08-23 | Lê Khánh Diệp | 61 | view |
| 2022-03-10 | phiennn | 73 | view |
| 2021-11-07 | eyraen | 73 | view |
| 2021-10-31 | tinavuuuu | 73 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1124497992 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05203973321 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658634538153 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5850996805 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.727272727 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205667576372 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617192580551 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656179483228 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984778707097 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509778225064 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.