Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The developing of the different infrastructures has forced governments to increase the expenses dedicated to modifying the current railway map against the money spent on roads. Some people agree with this decision, while others share an opposite opinion about this. This essay will partly agree with this statement because in my view both expenditures are needed.
On the one hand, trains are safer and more comfortable in comparison with automobiles and motorbikes. In other words, travel by this mode of transport is considered more relaxing because it not required the individual’s attention on the road, so the passenger feels generally less stressed using the train. Also, as far as safety is concerned, statistically the number of accidents occurred on the road are dramatically higher compared to trains. To illustrate, the latest statistic showed that the total of victims of collisions on roads last year, was three times higher respect to railways. Therefore, governments should invest in new and improved railways that will encourage people to use this mode of transport, and also will impact on reducing accidental hitting.
On the other hand, it can be denied that the number of drivers is increasing every year, who require good quality roads. This means that there are every time more car’s owners who need this mode of transport to travel and work, and who the status of some remote roads do not allow them to arrive at their destination. For example, in some countries such as the UK, roads were built a hundred years ago, due to the meteorology and lack of maintaining have become impassable for humans. To facilitate access to these roads, governments should as well as with railways spend money on roads.
Taking all the above into consideration, both modes of transport are required to be well maintained, governments might dedicate part of the expenses to improve, rebuilt and develop new railways and roads map for the benefit of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, while, as for, for example, such as, as well as, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18322981366 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82830607025 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4081455817 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.384615385 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159994528835 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615735200599 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615679139434 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981909867208 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485452388976 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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