the graph below show the consumption of fish and some kind of meat in European from 1979 to 2004
Fish and some different kinds of meat are food for people to live. And look at this graph, it shows the consumption of fish and some kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
The first and also the lowest line was fish. From 1979 to 2004 fish was on the decrease. The evidence was from 60 to 49 grams. The second was lamb. As you see, lamb reduced strongly from 150 to approximately 65 grams per person per week. From 1979 to 2004 the lamb decrease by about 85 grams. Move on to the beef increased irregularly. From 1979 to 1989, the beef went down and up again and again. It was not until 1994 that the consumption of beef dropped well.
At the other end of the scale, the consumption of chicken hit a high with 240 grams per person per week. It contracted completely with beef, lamb and fish. It increased 140 to 240 grams from 1979 to 2004.
In short, the graph blow decribes the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while fish, lamb and beef decrease from 1979 to 2004.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, so, well, while, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3743315508 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30952902839 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513368983957 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1207997357 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.4285714286 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44373859796 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149572707948 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143109248647 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301239740801 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168267884376 0.056905535591 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 50.2224549098 183% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 11.3001002004 32% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.8 8.58950901804 68% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 78.4519038076 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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