The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison were relevant.
The present line graph narrate the number of people who have a equal or greater than 65 age live in three different countries between 1940 to present time and also indicate how this percentages change in future till 2040.
Overall,it lucid that the population of overage people upsurge over a period. Moreover, this rate gradually increase in future.
Now, turning to the details in 1940 all nations has low population rate who are overage which was 5% in japan, 7% in swedan, 5% in usa. between 1940 to 1980 this number slowly decrease in usa and swedan on other hand this rate rapidly climb in japan. At 1980 to present time this amount is high in current time as compared to 4 decades ago. After a few years this percentages slowly increase but when line graph reach at 2030 this percentages upsurge with skyrocket for one decades and peak with over a one quarter percentages in swedan and japan and 22% in swedan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ercentages change in future till 2040. Overall,it lucid that the population of ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... change in future till 2040. Overall,it lucid that the population of overage pe...
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Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... Moreover, this rate gradually increase in future. Now, turning to the details in 1...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his rate gradually increase in future. Now, turning to the details in 1940 all ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Between
...s 5% in japan, 7% in swedan, 5% in usa. between 1940 to 1980 this number slowly decreas...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...red to 4 decades ago. After a few years this percentages slowly increase but when li...
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one decade', 'a decade', or simply 'decades'?
Suggestion: one decade; a decade; decades
... percentages upsurge with skyrocket for one decades and peak with over a one quarter percen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 163.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65644171779 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35554062662 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7504701863 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120460558211 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546853579073 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539691130541 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944960293578 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539381691555 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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