The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given line graph clearly illustrates the variation in quantity of passengers in an underground metro station between 6 am to 10 pm.

The underground station experienced an massive increase in the number of passengers from 100 to 400 between 6 and 7 o’clock, before hitting a free fall to nearly 200 at 10 o’clock. Then there was gradual growth in the passengers till 2 am, followed by a sharp decrease to 100 at 4 o’clock. Now after 4 o’clock to 8 o’clock, the same kind of pattern can be observed for the graph. The figures shoot up to nearly 400 and then came back to approximately 100, then witnessed a slight fluctuation.

To sum up, it is quite apparent that London underground station, saw a significant fluctuation in the number of passenger over the given interval. The highest number of passenger observe at 8 am and 4 pm around 400.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... The underground station experienced an massive increase in the number of passe...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, kind of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 151.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82781456954 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22594738746 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8238319946 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160880278858 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832217457695 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617331918535 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135768415363 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505109137576 0.056905535591 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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