Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
In today’s world, as we know most of the countries people are still living in poverty, hunger and lack of education, even in developing countries, we can’t eradicate the disease like Polio and also the crime rates are burgeoning due to lack of jobs. That’s why these third world countries are facing civil wars as well.
However, to overcome the situation of these countries, the powerful countries those who have control on world’s economy, always try to help them in their own ways. USA, Russia and European countries always provide their support to these developing in different sectors like trade and educations.Moreover, it’s a responsibility of powerful to give the developing countries equal opportunities to trade with them. One of the major problem which we have seen so far, that industrial countries provide loans to developing countries, at high interest rate and at their own condition, Which is quite difficult for them to pay back loans. Instead of giving loans, the world strongest nations should help these poorer nations with sending their own medical and teacher teams to eradicate health issues and teach children.
The United Nations also playing an important role, they are providing an equal opportunity to all nations, Whenever the natural cataclysm like Earthquake, storm and Tsunami comes in poor countries, all the nations came together to help that country to build again.
In my opinion the richer nations are doing their jobs very well, but corruption and graft are most important issue in these poorer nations, powerful nation should check how these poorer nations spending their money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...erent sectors like trade and educations.Moreover, it's a responsibility of powerful...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, third, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33716475096 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77165397118 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590038314176 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.160797831 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.125 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.625 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216680819653 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092961858696 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812816751732 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130221328315 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836531566505 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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