A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Many citizens argue that whether should they utilize animals to assist people in their existence or not. In contrast, other human being as well as myself do not agree to use animals for personal purposes, such as suppliers and medical research. In my viewpoint, animals should be treated fairly the same as human being because they are living creatures and other forms of sources can replace for their advantages in basic needs of human.
On the one hand, animals play a vital role in human demands, especially in providing nutrition for human or medical research. Firstly, animal flesh is an indispensable supply for humanity, specially to human, because they bring numerous benefits to residents, such as nourishment and have important effects in physical and mental health of exhaustive human development . Furthermore, some people have a prejudice that animal is a non-human animals, also stand at the second position in the food chain, so they do not have cognition as well as emotion as human. Secondly, people take advantage of animals in medical field as a laboratory mice. Animals use for testing are those who having incurable diseases and sooner or later that they will die, so scientists can freely test multiple vaccine on them without feeling guilty, before applying those drugs on human. As far as mainly citizens, animals are the lower animals than human being, so they do not have feeling, that is the main reason why scientific experts should exploit those animals for their medical treatment, such as trialing new vaccine for human. Besides that, human health is more substantial than anything, because human are the highest form of animal, hence scientists can not experiment untested drug on human being and the appropriate subject for their sublime goals is only animals. For example, hamster is not only a pet, but also an experimental animal models due to its benefits in medical field. Even many animal lovers have condemned those scientific experts because of their moral experiments on this species, they keep testing drug samples on hamster as long as protecting health issues of citizens. However, other residents along with myself think that animals deserve to treat equally. Thus, there are numerous methods to change human mind on employing animals.
On the other hand, me and other citizens believe that we should treat animals equal as human being, simply because they are living creature, so they do have emotion and their self-awareness as many of us. According to zoologists, animals have the same body structure and functions as us, that’s why they can sense things and react to their surroundings. Thus, The act of testing drug on them can harm the mental and physical health of those species. If we have to use those species as a guinea pig for vital medical researches of human life, we must heal them properly after being done at any cost. Additionally, meat by animals is required for all living species, nonetheless, there are other forms of foods that hold the same nourishment as meats, such as organic foods, as well as keep people healthier. Organic agriculture is rising rapidly worldwide due to the extraordinary progress of scientists. Because of this reason, this kind of food can take the place of the former – meat products, also reducing the state in which animals are being extincted by brutal human activities. For an instance, more Americans tend to change their old habit from using meat products to organic foods, because this latest types of product contain the same amount of nutrition as meats, so vulnerable animals will be less hunted or abused by human. This action join hand in creating safe environment for animals to live in peaceful with mankind.
In conclusion, notwithstanding the fact that advantages of animals to human are incontrovertible, me and other residents strongly support that animals have to be treated rightly as well as having the same right as human being, because of those above-mentioned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3336.0 1615.20841683 207% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 656.0 315.596192385 208% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08536585366 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06087906887 4.20363070211 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66222272416 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 305.0 176.041082164 173% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46493902439 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1048.5 506.74238477 207% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9135682266 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422897937771 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134521938267 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722714729974 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309551921827 0.151304729494 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058853242235 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 160.0 78.4519038076 204% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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