With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that genetically-modified foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Food scarcity has become an inevitable threat that humanity (is encountering) has to encounter / combat today. It is argued that genetically-modified or GM food may be a feasible option to tackle the problem. I strongly agree with this statement and believe that GM nutrition / genetically engineered crops can aid to feed a large number of people and they (appears) prove to be as healthy as natural food.
Genetically-synthesised foods are considered decent replacement for naturally-grown ones since the former is easy to mass-produce This means that with the help of factories that generate GM products of consumption distributes their GM produce across the globe. (Proceeding from this, the vast majority of Earth’s population can be provided with proper subsistence ? ) Moreover, the ability of its mass production facilitates the availability increases the affordability of this product, i.e. its relative cheapness. In other words, (artificial nutrition) bioengineered food is regarded as an accessible avenue to feed the humanity because it is simple to (generate) develop / produce.
Furthermore, a huge significant number amount of research has been accomplished since the first implementation introduction of genetically-modified foods (to) on the market. This is because scientists as well as the World Health Organisation are concerned about the health of people Hence, the ongoing and carry out meticulous studies to reinforce the safety of artificial sources of nutrition. For example, a recent study conducted by the Russian Health Institute concluded that there had been is no discrepancy in effect on a human body between GM foods and natural ones. Therefore / Hence, there are no proven adverse influences on an organism.
In conclusion, as human beings have reached the point of / are on the verge of / are on the brink of scarcity of food resources commence to lack (commence Ving) , I agree that GM crops should be considered as / regarded as a possible solution I agree with the above-stated idea since artificial food is capable of can be mass produced and its safety is out of the question.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ically engineered crops can aid to feed a large number of people and they appears prove to be as ...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'appear'
Suggestion: appear
... feed a large number of people and they appears prove to be as healthy as natural food....
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...body between GM foods and natural ones. Therefore / Hence, there are no proven adverse in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...resources commence to lack commence Ving , I agree that GM crops should be consid...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...esources commence to lack commence Ving , I agree that GM crops should be conside...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34441087613 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40762807034 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561933534743 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1926273224 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.416666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206162242696 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734492363961 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577885123722 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126365691497 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530208796279 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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