Have YOU have had a sense of loneliness every Christmas Eves or felt jealous to YOUR friend when he or her was presented Valentine Day’s gift? Love in YOUR air but not everyone could realize it , even though YOU have ever felt head over heels in love with someone , YOU admit to hide YOUR affection because of the assumption that love could disrupt YOUR studying career ,. In contrast, I totally agree with an ideal that students should fall in love in the college.
First, love makes the university life become more alive. Victor Hugo wrote: “ Life is the flower of which love is the honey.” Love colors pick on boring university life, indeed, when YOU get stuck with YOUR studying , YOUR boyfriend or girlfriend may be YOUR side to share sadness and give YOU good advices. Moreover, it is a motivation, when having a lover study in them same university ,YOU can help each other to do assignment or do science reseach project together.
Second, it can be seen that, who YOU are in loving relationship with plays as a YOUR family member. Living far from family often make YOU feel lonely, having someone cooking a meal or hang out with would help YOU relieve YOUR homesick.
Despite the benefits of affecting someone in college brings to us, many few people claim that love could destroy YOUR studying career . While it true that some learners have to quit their university program because she get baby with her boyfriend , the others get bad score for giving more attention to love live instead of studying, loving still give advantages to students if they know to balance between two those things. Moreover, studying same faculty with lover improves interest and sense of competition.
In conclusion, besides several disadvantage ,felling in love in college delivery lot of benefits. Students YOU give theirselves a chance because love is not difficult as YOU think, and let's image what YOUR future be without love
Have YOU have had a sense of loneliness every Christmas Eves or felt jealous to YOUR friend when he or her was presented Valentine Day’s gift? Love in YOUR air but not everyone could realize it , even though YOU have ever felt head over heels in love with someone , YOU admit to hide YOUR affection because of the assumption that love could disrupt YOUR studying career ,. In contrast, I totally agree with an ideal that students should fall in love in the college.
First, love makes the university life become more alive. Victor Hugo wrote: “ Life is the flower of which love is the honey.” Love colors pick on boring university life, indeed, when YOU get stuck with YOUR studying , YOUR boyfriend or girlfriend may be YOUR side to share sadness and give YOU good advices. Moreover, it is a motivation, when having a lover study in them same university ,YOU can help each other to do assignment or do science reseach project together.
Second, it can be seen that, who YOU are in loving relationship with plays as a YOUR family member. Living far from family often make YOU feel lonely, having someone cooking a meal or hang out with would help YOU relieve YOUR homesick.
Despite the benefits of affecting someone in college brings to us, many few people claim that love could destroy YOUR studying career . While it true that some learners have to quit their university program because she get baby with her boyfriend , the others get bad score for giving more attention to love live instead of studying, loving still give advantages to students if they know to balance between two those things. Moreover, studying same faculty with lover improves interest and sense of competition.
In conclusion, besides several disadvantage ,felling in love in college delivery lot of benefits. Students YOU give theirselves a chance because love is not difficult as YOU think, and let's image what YOUR future be without love
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- Student love is often beautiful and romantic it becomes colorful memories in student life Some people believe everyone should experience love during their time in university However falling in love doesn t play an important part when YOU re in college bec 73
- Studying ATC program is a bad decision Until now many people still believe that English language only helps improve English ability soft skills but does not equip specialized knowledge like other majors It is because of this point of view that the English 73
- Someone said Let us always meet each other with smile for the smile is the beginning of love Love is a fascinating idea all the time for Young people especially in college School age love has positive effects on the psychology of students they can share a 73
- Loving at school has been a controversial topic for a long time Many assume that it is not appropriate for students to be in a romantic relationship in college While there are some negative effects it is not unacceptable to be in love while studying in un 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[4]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
Have YOU have had a sense of loneliness every Christm...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...UR air but not everyone could realize it , even though YOU have ever felt head ove...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...elt head over heels in love with someone , YOU admit to hide YOUR affection becaus...
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Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... love could disrupt YOUR studying career ,. In contrast, I totally agree with an i...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d, when YOU get stuck with YOUR studying , YOUR boyfriend or girlfriend may be YOU...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng a lover study in them same university ,YOU can help each other to do assignment...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'YOUR'?
Suggestion: a; YOUR
...re in loving relationship with plays as a YOUR family member. Living far from family o...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... love could destroy YOUR studying career . While it true that some learners have t...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...it their university program because she get baby with her boyfriend , the others ge...
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Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... because she get baby with her boyfriend , the others get bad score for giving mor...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disadvantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'several disadvantages'.
Suggestion: several disadvantages
...of competition. In conclusion, besides several disadvantage ,felling in love in college delivery lo...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...conclusion, besides several disadvantage ,felling in love in college delivery lot ...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...love is not difficult as YOU think, and lets image what YOUR future be without love ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, while, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86280487805 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42576505832 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612804878049 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1766196295 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.692307692 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.536646913479 0.244688304435 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186709081891 0.084324248473 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192924811789 0.0667982634062 289% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303255641724 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.243119453503 0.056905535591 427% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.