Having children later in life
It is common in today’s society that many women delay parenthood until they have climbed the career ladder. While starting a family later in life has some certain drawbacks, the benefits are much more considerable.
The major drawback of going through pregnancy later in life to woman is undeniable. A major of modern-day women prefer prioritizing education and career to starting a family. This is due to the desire to pursue advanced degrees as well as the economic and housing uncertainty as it cost highly to raise a child. However, not only is it difficult for old women to conceive pregnancy but they will also experience heath problems during pregnancy. For example, they may risk a higher possibility of giving birth to a child with genetic disorder and miscarriage or complications.
Despite the possible disadvantages mentioned above, I am more convinced of the benefits of late childbirth. Before embarking on parenthood, both the man and woman must take into consideration about their financial ability to support a family and bring up their offspring. With the availability of contraceptive methods, parents now can delay parenthood until they are financially ready to bring up their offspring. It was uncommon in the past when women often started a marriage at an early age and gave birth to many children. It had led to population explosion and a severe shortage of food in some parts of the world, including Vietnam.
In conclusion, while there are undoubtedly downsides to give birth at later stages of life, I am completely in favor of having babies later in life since their economic benefits are much more considerable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12222222222 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95375653035 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1607779563 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.384615385 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221998638525 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658146643353 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102133559259 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155388977673 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11797984945 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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