Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?
It is true that throughout history, people living in social groups have always made rules and laws to live in harmony with each other. While some favor a lawless society, I completely agree that the result would be disastrous if everyone were able to do whatever they want.
The first reason in favor of my argument is that the idea of crime would exist if there were no laws to act as deterrent. For example, drug trafficking, murder and traffic offences might appear and more people would commit crimes as a way of making a living. It would pose a serious threat to society and create a violent culture since there are no organizations to enforce the law and make criminals repay for their wrongdoings. This situation might benefit lawbreakers and affect lives of innocent people.
Another reason supporting my view is that such activities doing harm to the environment and people’s well-being could increase rapidly. If there are no regulations on environmental problems, the ecological crisis, which even leads to the destruction of human life, could happen. Companies will discharge chemical waste into rivers, huge fires devastating forests and destroying wildlife will happen and no one will be blamed for their actions. In addition, in terms of public health services, it would be impossible to control the outbreak of an epidemic such as the COVID-19. The spread would be very rapid if people could do whatever they wanted and no restrictions were imposed.
In conclusion, society would collapse without rules. I totally agree with the view that it is necessary to enforce regulations in order to keep the society safe and peaceful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e result would be disastrous if everyone were able to do whatever they want. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0695970696 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71001874273 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.046824724 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20507586523 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711566164537 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868248619634 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120011574398 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641573484589 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.