Some people believe that it is important to own a home and have a good job before having children while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Use examples and explanations from your own experience
Most parents wish to provide the best possible environment for their children. An ideal context allows children to develop and succeed in life, but it is unclear what this may be. Although a home and a good career do give important support for having children, these are not essential for fostering offspring. I believe that providing sustenance needs and emotional support is critical.
Since a home provides shelter and good career provides finances, children have a better chance at a positive environment for growth but these do not automatically give emotional support for them. Indeed, it is often the case that professions and homes take a lot of time and energy away from parents and children are neglected which leads to poor self-confidence and mental health. One of my good friends is often depressed because his parents, who are a doctor and a layer, were always so busy with their work that they paid little attention to his emotional needs. So clearly, a good job and owning a home are not mutually inclusive to providing a good environment for having children.
In oder for children to be happy in life, they need the basics of food, shelter and clothing as well as love and confidence. The development of children is best preceived as both physical and psychological, for the former good nutrition and warmth is needed, for the latter it is caring and empathy from parents that is required. These can be given even if a home is rented and a minimal amount of finances are secured, as long as parents have time and energy to spend with their children. My friend, Mary, has a part-time job and rents an apartment, but she spends a lot of time with her daughter who seems very happy and confident.
In conclusion, although certain individuals ascetain that it is necessary to purchase a house and start a good career before having offspring, I feel it is more important to provide basic physical needs and psychological support. Children thrive when they receive nourishment, love, and support from their parents. Children do not care as much for financial wealth as much as they do for emotional wealth and time with their parents.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, i feel, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8719346049 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7161415705 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50408719346 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0869644618 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.2 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176454293391 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686518929623 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660638462366 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116327122692 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360407512041 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, i feel, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8719346049 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7161415705 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50408719346 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0869644618 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.2 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4666666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176454293391 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686518929623 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660638462366 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116327122692 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360407512041 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.