having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both side and give your opinion
In this present era, every people went wealthy lifestyle, therefore, they spend more time in work. Some people think having more capital and less free time is reasonable, while others do not support that statement. They feel earning less and having more free time is important. This essay will explain both aspects and also give my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are various reasons, which indicated having more money and limited time is good for human. First and foremost, nowadays people are looking for a wealthy lifestyle, which happens due to the high income. That gives them satisfaction. Furthermore, if people have more free time, then they start to think a lot, which lead them toward mental diseases such as depression and anxiety. For example, during the pandemic time, people have lots of time because of lockdown, so cases of those diseases increased. That was written in a survey of The University of Gujarat. It is better to have less time.
On the other hand, there are plenty of things, which say less money and more free time is improve human mindset. Firstly, If humans have enough free time which they spend with their family, then that will help them to create unbreakable bonding with their dear ones. Secondly, leisure time gives freshness to the peoples’ mind, which make their brain more creative and productive.
To conclude, although to have more money and less time is positive, less capital and more time is better than more money. In my opinion, it is good to have more money and last time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ch say less money and more free time is improve human mindset. Firstly, If humans have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31073025002 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4312280194 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.125 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.570895147708 0.244688304435 233% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225374422923 0.084324248473 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175866042963 0.0667982634062 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.409296233116 0.151304729494 271% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128248322323 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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