Nowadays more and more young people who is the important position in the government some people think that it is a good thing while other argue that it is not suitable discuss both the view and give your opinion
In the present era, the difference between younger people and older people in work is a debatable topic. The youth achieves a valuable position in government. Few Citizens believe that it is a reasonable thing but the rest of the peoples have not accepted this opinion, they feel old aged peoples are more important. This essay will explain both the aspects and give my point of view in the following paragraphs.
To starts with, there are plenty of beneficial reasons for youth employers. First and foremost, the younger generation has more knowledge about new technologies, which helps the authority to finish a task as soon as possible, which is the main factor of holding a top position in government. Furthermore, adults have more energy as compared to a senior citizen who complies to work in a faster way. For example, Japan is one of the most successful countries in the world, which hires only younger talent.
In contrast, there are few things, which push that older peoples are needed in an important position. Firstly, older peoples carry the experience with them, and it is one of the most superior weapons for them. That will make work or task smooth so it will complete with accurately. Secondly, senior citizens control hard situation very easily. For example, the top position of any government is Prime Minister, that holds by older peoples.
In my opinion, youth is more useful rather than old civilians. Because they come with new knowledge and energy.
To conclude, the older peoples experience is important but not as much as new technology and aggression of youth.
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...In India, there is one rule, which hired 40% of youth and 60% of experience emplo...
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...ve work experience. That can be solve by few steps: older peoples have to update ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15564202335 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7078916623 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7802320713 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220656539376 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687652358547 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710687654178 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143478277682 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698709802312 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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