Here and more people are relying on the private car at their major meant of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.
Nowadays, most people choose the car as important meant of transportation themselves. this leads to a range of consequences when that car is used a lot, and solutions are suggested to solve this problem.
On the other hand, each of people excessively uses a private car which certainly have negative consequences. Firstly, when there are means of transportation travel at the same time, the road gets definitely traffic jams. As a result, we would spend a lot of time on traveling on the way, which means our productivity could are also reduced. Secondly, accidents are increasing dramatically when a mass of cars are moving at the same way. Finally, we might be affected to our health by a number of smokes are released from the car.
In my opinion, there are three mainly solutions that could save us from above the problem. In some countries, people share the use of car which is an effective way of reducing the number of traveling by car. Besides, governments and local counsels should invest quality means of transportation, that means a fewer people use car as a major transportation. The effort to clean up cars would also be a good way to cut up these points In the future, we would hope that fewer and fewer people travel by car for their daily lives.
While the car is that more and more people use it for moving each day, I would hope that this problem needs to have some solutions which helps to avoid bad consequences.
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- Here and more people are relying on the private car at their major meant of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. 56
- Here and more people are relying on the private car at their major meant of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81694410126 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1223732018 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268170200947 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100844144974 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514987386802 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167857863114 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278099024749 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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