Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it

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Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world.

What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Today the number of homeless people in large urban cities of the world is increasing day by day.

Many people are forced to live on the streets due to material poverty. It is not an exaggeration to say that one of the another main reasons for homelessness is daily increase of population. For example many people in India live on the streets or different slums and many of these homeless people are unemployed and uneducated . In such as situation, one of the main victims are children ,because of this they cannot go to school or get a proper education like other children. I think one of the other causes of homelessness is the wars for example, in Afghanistan or Syria, due to the terroristic activities that have been going on for several years , all the housing in this places has not been left.

On the other hand,on of the solution to this problem is for the government to provide assistance and to provide them with appropriate jobs. For example most of the homeless people in India spend most of the money they earn on their children's education ,even though they live on the streets and different slums. According to their opinion, if their children become owner of eny profession in the future their lives will not be like this. It follows that quality education is another solution on this problem.

In conclusion, I can say that if government and some charities provide homeless people with essential assistance and also help to find proper job for them, this kind of poverty or homelessness will decrease step by step.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76404494382 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62398237591 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516853932584 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5770541432 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.636363636 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165940262071 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689210662377 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303886975601 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103352660898 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327341156057 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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