Homelessness is increasing in meny major cities around the world.
Nowadays people face more and more different types of problems. while homelessness is rising in many big cities and even megapolises, governments should tackle this issue. this essay will discuss how major causes could be solved by diverse measures.
To start with, I believe, there are tho major causes of the homelessness in the world. Firstly, while cost of the accommodation is increasing, it becomes less affordable for most of the population in cities. For this reason, many people, especially migrants, are forced to have poor housing and live in the suburbs, or even lose their houses at all. To give an example, the countries influencers in the Middle Age were famous for their high cost in residential areas and therefore, low classes were forced to live on streets, and then, special events for cleaning up the streets were carried out. Secondly, not less important, the salaries themself of the different classes. To my way of thinking, if the lower salaries had been the same, as the living wage, it would have helped many people, who are working as the simple plumbers or electricians. Evidently, part of the population just do not have as much money, as they need, because they are paying also for such things, like food, clothing and diverse taxes.
On the other hand, there are some measures could be taken to solve this problem. First and foremost, constructing shelters and building cheaper apartment blocks can definitely help. All people should have the equal rights to live in the houses, that is why such opportunity should be provided. To give an example, Canada has already tackled this problem, by organising different shelters for homeless people, and the government claimed, that this clearly helped the hazy problem. For another thing, minimization the cost of living or increasing the minimum salary. As taxes are now higher, the same changes should be done to the aspects of living. For instance, many people may know, that Scandinavian countries are very expensive, however, the percentage of homeless people is almost the lowest.
To sum up, even if the homelessness is the major problem in many cities, it could be improved by various measures. I believe, that it is not enough to know about this issue, people should help each other, and finally, maybe the government will pay the attention to it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, another thing, for instance, for another thing, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04370179949 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62279843724 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562982005141 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0196874647 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.263157895 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78947368421 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105170523096 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371352296152 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641594686842 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715772391367 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235430960979 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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