Human have made a great technological process in the last hundred years. However, this progress have negative effects on people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is often believed that advances in technology have a baleful effect on humankinds . However , some people consider that it is an integral part of life of those . this essay completely agrees with dernier view . First , this position will be proven by an analysis of assumed positive effect which is a humongous contribution to the economy of both individuals and society . A discussion of significant science breakthroughs will also support the view stated above .
The compelling reason why the technological progress has a beneficial effect on people's life is the increasingly soaring level of GDP . To put it differently , with making up of Internet , the more online shops have opened , the more money have collected by government as the tax for their activity . Not only do these taxes improve the current well-being , but also ensure well a balanced economy in the long run of country . For instance , having conducted social research in Moscow , scientists have revealed that the overall living conditions have improved by 10% since the taxes from the online commodity booths were introduced.
On no account should the salient effects of technological advances be ignored according to scientific breakthroughs. If it were not for current equipment , the recent significant experiments could not be carried out . it means that approximately 33% of new ways of using renewed energy would be unknown for us , that subsequently will lead to ecological catastrophe in order to be polluted by carbon dioxide and other toxic substances.
In conclusion , i am firmly convinced that technological progress should be a regarded as a great feat of human beings . this is due to the increasing well-being of dwellers of the country as well as to an enormous contribution to scientific field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23859649123 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09287268099 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617543859649 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9174058856 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184360833741 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635280556586 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516210327929 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103983280436 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525109464259 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.