some people believe that it is good to do multiple jobs,while others believe that it is better to focus on one job?Do you agree or disagree?
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Some people are of the opinion that being focused on the one job will have a more positive effect on human beings rather than having a multiple activities.In this essay , both viewpoints will be explained in the following paragraphs and my opinion will be presented.
First of all , the supporters of working on the different forefronts may have the following arguments.one of them is that many people are tended to have a lack of money , and in order to solve this complicated issue, they apply their resume for an another job. The situation can be tangled by more serious problem , for example having a family with little infants , it means that money should be spent on diapers,powders. it happens sometimes that total salary from one work does not seize the whole family's wants , this forces parents to have a second employment.
On the other hand , those who decide to earn for a life by a single job are guided by several reasons.Initially , it makes it possible to exempt the working places they could occupy by having a double job , which might be used for an unemployment inviduals.Moreover , people choose to have a one work because they are that sure that this job is going to bring for them a safistaction. having conducted that persons in UK who work with an enjoyment affect positively on society .
Taking into account the above points , it is not hardly to reckon that people are making their choice by themseleves , but i completely disagree with multiple employment , and the liberation of those will influence greatly on the efficiency of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87218045113 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89654967159 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.7571327382 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.142857143 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 20.7667163134 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10486200381 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454610949581 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366663705196 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686730381061 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217725871129 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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