IELTS part 2: In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out the history of the building they live in. What are the reason for this? How can people reasearch this?
It is increasingly prevalent among citizens in several parts of the world to research the origin of their accommodation building.This essay will discuss the reason and the way people seek for it.
It is an obvious fact that a considerable number of people curious about the feng shui of the location of the building they are living.They believe feng shui highly depend on the position of furniture or even the history of the house. For instance, Before moves to a new place, Asian usually hire a consultant to scrutinize everything house and give advice about the suitable location of furniture for good feng shui, which affect occupant's success, happiness and health and discover a cure for demons existed in the house.
There are two straightforward methods to easily search the origin of the house where they are living.First method is to ask local dwellers for the list of old owners and the interesting story of what was happened in the building. For example, ask neighbors if someone died or there was a murder happened in the house. This way perhaps the accuratest method. However, in case of local people are clueless about their house, people can assess the internet and search for the street where the building is located or attend the nearby library to find information of that.
In conclusion, people search for the history of the house to satisfy their curiosity and also to scrutinize for sorts of things to relocate it and therefore have a good feng shui.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87250996016 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67364815747 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545816733068 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2627038598 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.875 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21634445338 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932136402542 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405926686741 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124347237056 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303245421761 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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