Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the
causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what ef ects does it have on the people concerned and on
society as a whole?
Agreeably, one of the main causes of illiteracy is poverty, widely-observed in low-income communities. Because of the lack of financial resources some families cannot send their children to school and in many cases such children start to work in young ages in order to support their families which causes early school drop-outs. Secondly, individual disabilities such as dyslexia and blindness increase rate of illiteracy. Nowadays, this case mostly affects adults, because at times when they studied at school such disabilities were not widely recognised. Fortunately, countless researches have been made on this issue and children have higher chance to overcome such problems.
The main problem illiteracy creates for individuals is trouble finding a proper job. Normally, illiterate people can barely accomplish daily tasks, for instance, ordering a food, doing shopping. Such people work on low wage jobs and have a little chance to get promotions. As a result, these people have low self-esteem and are not encouraged to improve themselves. All of these factors can lead to psychological problems and depression. Additionally, in communities where illiteracy levels are high unemployment rate is higher 2-4 times. Increased rate of unemployment in its turn have a negative effects on economy and on society as a whole by making living standards lower.
It seems that, illiteracy problem mainly stems from economical conditions of countries and when not solved causes a lot more complications to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...t, illiteracy problem mainly stems from economical conditions of countries and when not so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, as a result, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52155172414 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06115518654 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646551724138 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1770371096 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5384615385 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14973379107 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513783762929 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335795135828 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999721808941 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329708131662 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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