Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations.
However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the
poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that the governments of wealthy countries should help the lesser developed nations in the advancement of sectors like health, education and commerce. Personally, I agree with this viewpoint and the following paragraphs shall outline my reasons for this belief.
Firstly, fundings from rich countries can stop illegal immigration permanently. This means that if impoverished nations get help in making advancements in different important sectors then lesser and lesser individuals will leave their country in search of a better life. For instance, a man getting his necessities fulfilled in his home country will never migrate to a wealthy nation. As a consequence of this wealthy nations will be less burdened with unskilled immigrants who may have otherwise caused a problem to the welfare system.
Secondly, more prosperous nations will build stronger relations with less developed countries if they help them in advancements. This means that rich nations will have less difficulty in trading with poorer nations which will strengthen their economy further. Moreover, Developed countries can also import materials they have a shortage of in exchange for the help they gave them. In addition to that underdeveloped nations will be a strong military ally in case of a war. For example, India supported the United States of America in the war of Afghanistan and as a result, the United States of America won that war.
In conclusion, I agree that less prosperous nations should be helped by wealthy nations in the terms of education, well being and business as it will help them build stronger relationships and will stop illegal immigrants indefinitely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42016806723 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9028109999 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554621848739 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0645084002 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.272727273 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254932752073 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102683235646 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638877003744 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170090382796 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037233618271 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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