With the improvements in today's health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people - in this point of my view, I agree with this opinion, moreover, the society will be able to cope with the increa in numbers of elderly people today and managed it properly.
Elder people are like a child, they can not maintain properly in there life easily, that is the reason for the health care need to assistance to them for good survival with the society.
On the other hand, some elder person maintains their time perfectly, at that time society are not more anxious regarding these people and age is the only number for them, which is not impacting their smart life.
Most of the elder people can keep the whole entire circle is very smooth, where these person does not need any help from other, however, their oldest time is really poor without caring of the health care. Some elder people have lots of health issues, they can take different medications for these, after getting all of these support the people can stay better and health issues are not problematical for their age. In a matter of fact, many medical issues are facing at that time like diabetics, kidney diseases, heart, and liver-related diseases, and some are also affected cancer, all these diseases are taken off by health care and society are bound to take care of this illness person. If the sickness is found on the primary level then it can be recovered very properly and the people can keep well in the rest of life, which can be possible only for the interactive social people.
Additionally, some elder people do not need to get help from other people, they are saving their earnings for their oldest time, also these people are more conscious about their future health issues and they try to get care from the health care center when they were young and worked for their career. Some people are hardworking very much also proper maintain their BMI, in this type people are not facing any physical issues when they are getting old, also they are taking all regular checkup from the medical center, do not want to avoid it by any chance. I see lots of business magnet people and higher management of the office are more knowledgeable about these type of issues, So they can keep well to go extra mile in their life.
Overall, My opinion is that, the older people are need to take the heath care support from the beginning of their service life, then it can be good for them to assist them bein
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'these people', 'these persons'?
Suggestion: this person; these people; these persons
...ole entire circle is very smooth, where these person does not need any help from other, howe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, then, well, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6334841629 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13646361113 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452488687783 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8574914057 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.181818182 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.1818181818 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418300456001 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192899294885 0.084324248473 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151579432419 0.0667982634062 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271412920334 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171443865678 0.056905535591 301% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'these people', 'these persons'?
Suggestion: this person; these people; these persons
...ole entire circle is very smooth, where these person does not need any help from other, howe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, then, well, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6334841629 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13646361113 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452488687783 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8574914057 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.181818182 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.1818181818 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418300456001 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192899294885 0.084324248473 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151579432419 0.0667982634062 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271412920334 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171443865678 0.056905535591 301% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.