With the increase in global tourism, it has become obvious that there are many advantages and disadvantages that can be found from the effects of tourism.
Do you believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer.
In recent years, thanks to improved transport system and services, we have seen a drastic development in tourism all over the world. To some people, this upward trend would bring numerous positive aspects for the society, while others reject that tourism is currently doing more harm than good. In this essay, I will argue that even though there are still several issues associated with tourism, its development is still beneficial in many ways.
One of the greatest advantages of tourism is that it helps our countries become more well-known to foreigners. With the help of tourism, we can develop our identity and advertise positive sides of our cultures to attract tourists. Furthermore, tourism could create more job opportunities for many citizens, especially unemployed ones. In the long run, they could hugely profit from this sector and then contribute to the government’s revenue and the local economy. These earnings then will be used to improve service provision and travelling experience of tourists, thereby attracting more arrivals to these areas.
However, tourism also leaves several consequences, especially pollution. For example, many environmentalists have reported that travellers have laid an enormous amount of waste in various heritages. This issue not only contributes to the severity of pollution but also damages the beauty of these places. Additionally, due to poor awareness of several tourists, many heritages and varying historical buildings are seriously ruined at an alarming rate. If local councils did not take immediate action on this issue, these buildings would gradually lose their original historical and cultural values and become less attractive to tourists.
To sum up, I believe that despite several issues coming with tourism, this sector is still indispensable and particularly advantageous because of various contributions it makes to the society and economy in general.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, well, while, for example, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54761904762 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90751872557 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636054421769 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.851653549 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188747183957 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643645671201 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444494998956 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117123860245 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361537014916 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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