Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Shopping and commerce has drastically become common in recent decades, thanks to the improvement of technology and customer services. As a result, some hold the view that technological developments have greatly improved customers’ shopping experiences, while others are against with this idea. This essay will aim to discuss these two opposite views and explain personal opinions related to this topic.
Modern technology has greatly contributed to the introduction of online shopping, which provides an efficient and time-saving way for customers to purchase products remotely. With the ever-growing need for convenience, many web developers have created thousands of websites for buyers to visit and add products into their carts online. Many people now can buy a wide variety of products with simple clicks online and then receive their products at their own homes with the help of delivery services. Therefore, it is clear to say that technology has created a new and convenient and commercial environment for customers and also increase the sales of numerous companies.
However, technology still leaves some drawback on shopping experience. According to customer feedback, some buyers are dissatisfied with the quality of the products when they go shopping online. Consumers when shopping online may be fooled by the illustrations provided by the web pages developers. Thus, they are unknown about the real appearance of the products they will add to their cart. Consequently, people may disbelieve in modern technology and then go back to the original shopping approach.
To conclude, although technology undeniably has satisfied the need of buying items remotely and improved the customer experience, many argue that modern technology fails to address the issue of the unexpected quality of products during shopping online. Personally, technology are contributing most to the improvement of commerce and shopping experiences and it will soon tackle the issues mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6511627907 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98943515613 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56146179402 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6904697029 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207040997775 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077598688142 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562612135503 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130366920434 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537226771778 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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