No one can deny, in recent time, each and every person give the more preference to use the goods which made with natural resources. Which leads to the harmful impacts on environment. I shall put down the appropriate reasons alongside also give the suitable solutions in further paragraphs.
To commence with, environment problems are rise rapidly day-by-day. Air is inflicted polluted by more usage of harmful chemicals, gases. Moreover, factories and industries when released the waste toxic chemicals in the water sources thus they also contaminated the water of rivers and seas. Secondly, nowadays, products which made with the natural things are more used by the people likewise, beauty products, food products, clothes and many more things. As a consequences, harmful chemical and more usage of natural sources are damage the environment. Today, we have a dire need to protect our environment. people should be reduce the usage of natural sources as much as. Alongside, government should be made the low against the high usage of toxic chemical by factories as well as hard and fast rules should be implemented on those industries which released the toxic waste in the water and contaminated the water sources.
Furthermore, nowadays, people used the wood furniture in their home. since, wood furniture on high demand, people cutting the forests. Rationality behind that terrestrial animals face the lot of problems related the feeding, sheltering and many more things. Cutting trees and forests invited the natural disasters likewise, floods, soil erosion, increase the value of harmful gases in the environment. This all obstacles created by the high consumption of natural resources. So, people must be planted trees more and more in order to improve our environment. As well as, forests should be protected by the government. High authorities should be make policies for protect the nature.
To conclude, damaging of natural resources increase day-by-day. people should be used less this resources and government also need to make some better policies for saving the nature and remove the pollution in the environment.
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- Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages to this Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34226190476 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77940977427 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508928571429 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5172339871 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4761904762 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149692126129 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453510511641 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415586124639 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980584264964 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366888240998 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.