Currently, with modernization and high tech ways of shopping people opt for online system rather than direct shopping. The trend seems to be increasing each day. In the following essay we will discuss abour the advantages and disadvantages of the same trend individually, as well as to the companies.
With easy access to the shopping system either through feasible apps, created by shopping companies or online ordering shopping has been easy than ever. Firstly, it saves ample amount of time spent wasted through the crowded malls or shoping grocery stores.For instance, my recent encounter with danube( grocery mart store) app has made life easier than ever. As shopping via this app made it simple with easy display of prices and recent offer which I can avail. Secondly, time spent to commute to the shopping places reduces infact most of the onliners deliver the products home or to the required address, thus saving fuel expenses and also the reducing congestion caused in parking lots at online malls. Companies benefit as well, as they have their products displayed out as an advertisement and the most attractive to the eye sells better.
I realized what a boon shopping online is to my expenses, as it dropped the grocery bill to half as i bought stuff which I wanted than what was available, hence saving on my month budget.
As every step has its own disadvantages, online shopping does as well. At times, shopping clothes online could be a messy deal, with unappealing texture and clothes which look quite different from the snaps provided online. Grocery shopping could also be a concern in countries where addresses are poorly based, it is more cumbersome for companies to address this issue.
With the above said issues and likings, online shopping still holds immense importance these days. On the whole, its a fun filled and new experience to shop and receive your packages while your leisurely awaiting them as your destination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04012345679 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56820355236 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614197530864 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.311681607 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243729745397 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754119494444 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373072857296 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122647501983 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333596641513 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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