An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
It is thought by some that more and more people prefer to buy goods through the internet. While online shopping can be dangerous to individuals and businesses, it is convenient, time and budget friendly way to do shopping.
On the one hand, using the internet for shopping can be threaten to customers and sellers simultaneously. When people buy products through the web, they cannot to assess the quality of the products as a result they can buy items which’s quality is very poor. In addition, items can be lost on their way to the customer as some people do not want pay for expensive delivery service. Another point to consider is that nowadays there are many fake online-shopping websites, when people want to buy product from that websites they input their credit cards details, as a result burglars use that information in order to withdraw all money.
On the other hand, despite the disadvantages above online-shopping the most convenient way to buy big variety of products. People who prefer online-shopping do not spend a lot of time for purchasing, in other words, they do not need to go to big shopping malls and spend whole day for choosing one pair of bots. Furthermore, online-shopping is always cheaper that real shopping. These is because online-shop owners do spend money for renting the place, they do not need to have big shops with state-of-the-art design. They pay less tax and do not hire many people to work, as a result it gives them an opportunity to sell their products for reasonable price.
In conclusion, despite online-shopping is sometimes dangerous, it gives the opportunity to people save their time and money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95323741007 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01042174742 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517985611511 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9589188539 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275343924352 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109456270055 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345205844223 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160730247393 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588082260351 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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